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All Deviations
All Deviations




Red strings form themselves into braids, firebent & erratic,
until they fall into the notes they have invented for the sake
of a puzzle, fingers dripping poetry as though from tiny pinpricks,
falling acidic into the mouth, words as flat as a pickguard as they
spill from the instrument's tongue.

The hands are something irregular, vintage,
as black & distorted as a warped vinyl. Pills
of rainwater flood the vocal cavities as they try to explain
from the phonograph, not a creator but a projector, a
conformist. An octave as low as a jazz musician
in some dark New York City club; the eyes are closed to the sounds,
exotic and warm. The following is not something uncomfortable,
but a painting, as the strings stretch from the neck into the
the gold skylight of sand melting in the receptive gaze.

The broken pieces of a record, taped to gray plaster
walls to simulate the shuddering wings of blackbirds
on dry mornings. A compact disc collection, mutilated
to such an extent that there is no equation one could
possibly employ to decipher the metaphors, the reflective
strands of a cassette tape, shimmering in musical paths
towards a collapse of silence.

I wrap your copper strings around my inkribbon,
to translate the music of my muttering to you
in the only medium I've ever understood.
©2006-2008 ~milpalabras
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Submitted: April 5, 2006
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Yup, 'nother one. This one is actually decent, I promise. I'm too sick to say anything else besides the fact that this was a hellish process (I lost the first draft), and my friend Sarah Sheffe is a doll and a half.
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~MikeyBlighe:iconMikeyBlighe: Apr 6, 2006, 10:17:07 AM
You asked for comments, and I guess I'll try the best I can.

The imagery is startlingly good, and every word cut through the air like a knife.

Everything about your style of writing here is perfect. Don't ever change unless it is for the better.

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"They ate every letter in the alphabet and still had an appetite."
~milpalabras:iconmilpalabras: Apr 6, 2006, 11:52:45 AM
Aw, thank you honey:)

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i said i was wearing black so you could
see me against the sky
~milpalabras:iconmilpalabras: Apr 14, 2006, 6:21:09 AM
Your mother.

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i said i was wearing black so you could
see me against the sky
~milpalabras:iconmilpalabras: Apr 14, 2006, 9:23:27 PM
<333

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i said i was wearing black so you could
see me against the sky